script writer

[rocconiks]

Hi sir
I am rocky ...i have written several kinky scripts and a fan cum performer of pissing sex. I can imagine various storylines on pissing sex and normal sex. Pls give me a chance to work for your studio.

thanks

[xxx]

Send me a PM with your ideas for a couple scenes.

[Flumi]

Hehehe..., maybe you should offer your customers to buy the "story" for a scene, like for example 100€.
They tell the story and you produce it for them :P

[magizi877]

I hope the stores don't have any dialogue.

[Tastes Like Ass]

^Agreed. No dialogue, please.

[dap-addict]

Why no basic words like
- Fuck me harder!
- Yeah, deeper, please!
- Common guys, finish me off!
etc.

[gapefan]

All of Proxy Paige's dirty talk during her TAP/DAP was incredibly sexy!!!

But I'm pretty sure that was all spur of the moment, real, dirty talk!!!

Which was awesome!!!

[tgcfc26]

I like the script they use now:

Beautiful woman/women enter the room

Notice somebody's left some toys out and proceed to stick them in their anuses

Guys with three legs enter

Cue pounding assault on the ladies gorgeous holes

The End

[Sir Noel]

Not that keen on the idea of scripts but I would like to see a more organic start to scenes. A bit of bts prep, ad hoc interview with the girl or something else that is a little less staged than at present (hearing the girl say how she feels about the scene, maybe excited or nervous etc makes her seem that much more real and draws me in the way character development in movies makes you feel more about the characters).
As things stand I find the scene openings WAY too staged and formulaic. They are, by far the weakest and most forgettable part of LP scenes.

[hernando]

The year is 2015, the city is Prague.

A young women enters a sterile white room. Within are 3 naked men, their penises are large. Or are they? Not all is as it seems. Perhaps they are only comparatively large and in fact should be larger.

'Excuse me Gentlemen' she asks them ' Could I trouble you for a glass of water and a cup of cream?

A large brute of a man looks her up and down. "the water we can provide, but the cream? No. There is no market for cream in prague at the moment. And by the way the water will be provided directly from our penises"

She nods, the words he says make no sense and yet somehow make perfect sense. She notices for the first time the men are aroused, their penises hard, proudly rising north. "have you been having sex with each other?" she asks one.

"no" he replies, taken aback "we don't do that in this room, "you'll have to go to another room for that. But we'll have sex with you if you like, all three of us"

It is a fine offer and she considers it, sex with 3 men is surely better than one she thinks, or is it? Maybe not for everyone.

"can I bring a friend along" she asks them, thinking of her companion from Russia who has cruelly been denied sex for years by her wicked uncle.

The men consider the question together and begin to make complicated calculations on a piece of paper. When they have completed this, one replies:
"Not this time, but if this session goes well, perhaps you can bring a friend along if she is popular. Or cheap."

She understands - this all makes sense to her. But under this she has an unsettling feeling, as if somewhere hundreds of men will be fighting over how this very situation will play out, over the positions she will have sex in, the clothes she wears, and even the color of the couch in the corner.

She suddenly remembers something... "what about my drink?"

One of the men smiles and rubs his penis - "you'll have your drink, oh yes, you'll have your drink. Open up"

FIN

[magizi877]

A bit of bts prep, ad hoc interview with the girl or something else (hearing the girl say how she feels about the scene, maybe excited or nervous etc makes her seem that much more real and draws me in the way character development in movies makes you feel more about the characters).

this is EXACTLY what I don't want to know or hear about.

The reason why I don't want dialogue is because most porn actors just can't act (acting requires lots of practice)
and there is always communication problems with european performers.... which just makes the whole thing look awkward.

And I can just imagine the amount of people who will just jump straight to the "sex" part. lol

So IMO the script should be something that requires zero talking and is based mostly on contextual situations. It has to be stuff that
the actors can relate so, they ca be them self's and require as little acting as possible.

For instance, it strikes why no porn studios stage a brothel situation, where the scene starts with the girl putting her
sexy outfit and maybe doing some last minute touches to her make up, before entering the customer or customers room.
Maybe throw some customers signing up or choosing from a catalogue which girl they want to fuck between takes.

[Tastes Like Ass]

The year is 2015, the city is Prague.

A young women enters a sterile white room. Within are 3 naked men, their penises are large. Or are they? Not all is as it seems. Perhaps they are only comparatively large and in fact should be larger.

'Excuse me Gentlemen' she asks them ' Could I trouble you for a glass of water and a cup of cream?

A large brute of a man looks her up and down. "the water we can provide, but the cream? No. There is no market for cream in prague at the moment. And by the way the water will be provided directly from our penises"

She nods, the words he says make no sense and yet somehow make perfect sense. She notices for the first time the men are aroused, their penises hard, proudly rising north. "have you been having sex with each other?" she asks one.

"no" he replies, taken aback "we don't do that in this room, "you'll have to go to another room for that. But we'll have sex with you if you like, all three of us"

It is a fine offer and she considers it, sex with 3 men is surely better than one she thinks, or is it? Maybe not for everyone.

"can I bring a friend along" she asks them, thinking of her companion from Russia who has cruelly been denied sex for years by her wicked uncle.

The men consider the question together and begin to make complicated calculations on a piece of paper. When they have completed this, one replies:
"Not this time, but if this session goes well, perhaps you can bring a friend along if she is popular. Or cheap."

She understands - this all makes sense to her. But under this she has an unsettling feeling, as if somewhere hundreds of men will be fighting over how this very situation will play out, over the positions she will have sex in, the clothes she wears, and even the color of the couch in the corner.

She suddenly remembers something... "what about my drink?"

One of the men smiles and rubs his penis - "you'll have your drink, oh yes, you'll have your drink. Open up"

FIN

LMFAO!!! That is hilarious! Very nicely done!

[Engineer]

LOOOL hernando
that's a great sarcasm and critic story!
Wow! Congrats you look a professional writer!

[dpconnoisseur1]

I like the script they use now:

Beautiful woman/women enter the room

Notice somebody's left some toys out and proceed to stick them in their anuses

Guys with three legs enter

Cue pounding assault on the ladies gorgeous holes

The End

+1, Just show more of models body during the tease not just upper torso.

[SEMU]

it"s so excited when the porn actress says "arrrghhhhhhh" during a rough double anal action like Alysa when Omar G. and his team puts their 3 dicks in her ass!
Do you see what i mean guys???

[SEMU]

O i forgot to says,when the girl says some "NO" "NO" "NO" before to get assfucked by a big dick in a flexi position!!!
And also when she says some "aie" "aie""yeah" "yeah"
I mean i love to see a very submissive girl when she get assfucked by many big dicks and i want to see in her eyes she is impressed and scared by the act!!!

[cloverland]

i come to LP for the pure gonzo, nothing but straight to fucking

if you mean writing things for the girls to say? also bad. let it be natural and what they really mean

[dap-addict]

For instance, it strikes why no porn studios stage a brothel situation, where the scene starts with the girl putting her
sexy outfit and maybe doing some last minute touches to her make up, before entering the customer or customers room.
Maybe throw some customers signing up or choosing from a catalogue which girl they want to fuck between takes.

Thant would be a really nice script!

Also the contextual no big word situations we got early 2000 by Private was often fine. Like...girl walks into a bar, 5 man stand around and are bored, she orders a drink, they approach her, she goes on her knees and starts to suck them. Really basic, but so nice! I would sometimes prefer such a thing over the ever repeating dildo play.

[visigoth2020260]

it woul not be adequate to use such words, as it sound and is directed to a certain group of people ( as drinking champagne ) who the F came up with tha phrase to said drinking piss.
but the plot intro is a most, esenes intros can not continued as,
example, a girl standing just touching her body or one here and another across the room doing the same, slightly moving and touching themselves, ( it has been done 1000s of times ) is not bad but it is overuse. even PW did a nice intro the other day.
the demand is not for elavorated intros but for simple ones,
and for the action to fallow the intro,
todays GG is a nice plot intro exelent in my opinion.
but once the fuccking began, it is as they forgot the plot altogether
like it never happened, we did not see the model been reluctant (having or assuming a specified role unwillingly ) or felt it, it was minimal at best. but none the less it is an excellent scene.
only GG does magnificent plots.
with your support it can only get better, thank you for watching.
...............................
and at the end ( this would have been a nice touch ) the model was supposed to call her husband and show him her broken ass wile begin him to come home, and maybe just maybe showing the husband opening the door and she running into his arms all full of cum, the end.
only GG does it.
excellent scene.
https://www.analvids.com/watch/95480/th ... ow_gio2218

[Giorgio Grandi]

it woul not be adequate to use such words, as it sound and is directed to a certain group of people ( as drinking champagne ) who the F came up with tha phrase to said drinking piss.
but the plot intro is a most, esenes intros can not continued as,
example, a girl standing just touching her body or one here and another across the room doing the same, slightly moving and touching themselves, ( it has been done 1000s of times ) is not bad but it is overuse. even PW did a nice intro the other day.
the demand is not for elavorated intros but for simple ones,
and for the action to fallow the intro,
todays GG is a nice plot intro exelent in my opinion.
but once the fuccking began, it is as they forgot the plot altogether
like it never happened, we did not see the model been reluctant (having or assuming a specified role unwillingly ) or felt it, it was minimal at best. but none the less it is an excellent scene.
only GG does magnificent plots.
with your support it can only get better, thank you for watching.
...............................
and at the end ( this would have been a nice touch ) the model was supposed to call her husband and show him her broken ass wile begin him to come home, and maybe just maybe showing the husband opening the door and she running into his arms all full of cum, the end.
only GG does it.
excellent scene.
https://www.analvids.com/watch/95480/th ... ow_gio2218

Your comment is very smart and deserve and answer.
I do not like to have a girls having sex and looking unwilling, it is very borderline with rules of payment processor and I do not really like it. The script miss a excellent reason why the girl should be very willing after the intro, the reason now is just specious. I will work on this in the short future, to find better solutions to have the girls change from "unwilling" to "willing".
Give me some time, the future of the studio Giorgio Grandi are stories and movies bit I need to tune my way to write it

[Jocke]

I want to see the brothel scenario!

[visigoth2020260]

NUNS INCANTATION
-------------------------------
maria and juliet woke
up just like any other day, as they
put on their holy garment, there was a

knock on the door, it was sister

manuella informing them that the

mother superior wanted to see them at

once, soon after they both are at the

presence of the mother superior,
MS...i have call upon both of you as
something awful happened to a group of
local priest. it seem that at the

guesthouse they where staying some how
as they where watching tv, all of the

sudden some pornografic material came

on the screen.
the guest name is mr GG and he call

this morning informing me tha the goup
of priest have been glued to the tv
all naked and jerking off, and that he

has not been able to make them stop,

that it is as if they are in a trance

or some evil spirit has taken over

them as he himself has not been able

tu turn off the tv set.
he has requested that i send someone

to enchant and deliver those priest

from that evil emptrapment that they

are in.
so i have call upon you to go to this

house and do all you can to help this

poor souls, but first you must take a

bottle of holly squirt, your holly,
to be continued.

[davebowman]

Nothing wrong with a bit of art. I'm down for seeing girls perform classic Shakespearean monologues, whilst getting their assholes stretched out and pounded by thick, veiny cock.
"To sleep, perchance to be fucked in the arse —ay, there's the rub"

[sexaddict251]

Send me a PM with your ideas for a couple scenes.

Hello Will you read my script sir? I'll post one here, I couldn't PM you, PM is not working.

[sexaddict251]

Send me a PM with your ideas for a couple scenes.

English is not my 1st language, it took 2hrs to write this script.

Homecoming
(Mom is wearing a very short dress, its obvious that she's not wearing a panty, everyone can see her pussy but acts like everything is fine)
Scene 1 - Mom is doing something in kitchen, dad is reading news paper, Sister is doing something in her phone.
Calling bell rings, mom opens door and welcomes her stepson, his sister and dad also come and greet him.
Dad: Why didn't you call? I would have come to the airport.
Son: I was hoping to give you a surprise..
Dad: that worked...
Son: hey sis, how's everything going?
He opens his bag and gives her a present...
Sis is so happy, she hugs her brother
Mom: ohh that's cute...
Everyone is joyful ...
Mom: Go get changed baby, lunch is almost ready...

Scene 2 - He's sitting on his bed and is unpacking, mom comes with a glass of juice, She gives it to him... She's going to ask about his exam, she's standing hands crossed, thrusting her groin a little, so he can clearly see her pussy...
Step mom: So how was your exam?
Son : everything was good mom...
Mom: Whats your future plans?
Son: I'm planning to look for a job here... can I stay here for a while if you don't mind...
Mom: Yes honey, you can stay here as long as you want... Come down when you are ready.
Mom is leaving his room...

Scene 3 - Mom is setting everything on the table, dad and sis are sitting at the table. Son comes down the stairs and joins them.
Mom sits on the opposite side of him. They are having their family meal...
Mom is planning to give him a show, during the meal she drops a spoon accidentally. As she expected,He goes down the table to retrieve the spoon.
He sees her pussy...
Mom spreads her legs wide and gives him a better view ...
Mom: do you see it honey?
Son: yes mom
He moves closer, she's sitting on the edge of her chair, he comes closer an gets a sniff. She's in heat, He blows air on her pussy, he was going to lick... But she had other ideas, she squirts piss on his face to drive him away. He takes spoon and returns to his chair embarrassed, his face and shirt is wet, dad asks what happened, he tell he spilled water accidentally, mom has a teasing smile on her face.

Scene 4 -After lunch son comes to kitchen to help his mom. He can see her bare butt. He comes and hugs her from behind, he hugs her and grabs her pussy...
Mom: hey, watsup? Where's your dad and sis?
Son is rubbing her wet pussy and is thrusting his groin on her bare butt a little...
Son: They are in their room...
He continues his groping and his occasional kissing on her shoulder.
She turns around to face him, he hugs her again and gropes her ass. He starts to kiss her. They stop kissing & smiles at each other, he takes one soon from counter and drops it

Sex part begins
Mom goes down and sucks, he gives her a drink after oral, he eats her, she pisses in a glass to show him, she drinks it before her son, then they fuck, after the sex scene he gives her another piss cum cocktail...
End or part 2(bro-sis)

[dap-addict]

The script miss a excellent reason why the girl should be very willing after the intro, the reason now is just specious. I will work on this in the short future, to find better solutions to have the girls change from "unwilling" to "willing".
Give me some time, the future of the studio Giorgio Grandi are stories and movies bit I need to tune my way to write it

That sounds very interesting!
Looking forward to it!

[visigoth2020260]

ho boy, ho boy, ho boy,

one more time master GG does it, in this new scene (movie)
you will immerse yourself as you have never had, it is a plot very well organized, the narrative is absolutely fantastic, and puts the story in motion for a brilliant performance
For those involved, this scene (movie, is more like a movie ) intro is spectacular, I was not expecting what I was hearing and seeing, it knocked me out of my chair.
GG deserves a grammy.

https://www.analvids.com/watch/112191/p ... ow_gio2296

[visigoth2020260]

Slammed brides Goes Wet.

very nice scene and 13 looks fantastic.
the scene action is hot very hot.

I just wished, the scrit would have been more elaborated.

as this one.

John goes to the airport to pick up his bride, while all his friends are
waiting at the studio they rented, no other lady friend was in attendance
as they all were very mad at john, cause they tough that john was making a very bad decision, to get a bride from Colombia.

NARRATIVE
one of the girls said to john, ( for all you know she can be a fucking whore, please john don't do this to yourself, to which john, reply, I love her and she is so beautiful, and all my male friends like her, {{{ little did john knew that his lovely bride was doing face time with all his friends}}} and are very happy for me ). the girls looked at each other and then say to john, fuck yourself and don't even bother to invite us to your white wedding.....
................................................................................
back to the big day.
john is already on his way back from the airport, he is so happy, he calls his friends and shows them his bride over the phone, ill be there in 10 minutes
guys.
now the guy's, device a plan to get john away..

1 guy said, let's tell him his mother is sick and he needs to go to her house
2 other guys said, no, that shit sound stupid, just let's send him for beers
3 other guys said, how are we going to do that, for sure he won't want to leave his new bride all alone with us.
4 another guy replied, I got a brilliant idea, listen to it.

one of us is going to wait outside for john to arrive, once he parks his car, go to the passenger side and help the bride out, then immediately, tell john to go and get some beers, cause we are running low, then we gonna have her for ourselves. bring her inside and put all the locks on the door, so when john comes back, he won't be able to come

NARRATIVE
they went ahead with the plan as planned, now they got the bride
inside and poor john is buying beers at the store.

at first, the bride is reluctant to give in, to the guys' desires,
but gives in after seeing all those big cock, her only words were,
( what about john ) to wish the guy's reply, don't worry he is at the store and won't be able to get in, we put all the locks on the door, and she gave a big smile, and the fucking started.

30 minutes after.
john is desperately trying to open the door, and like a maniac yelling for the guys to hear him and come downstairs to open the door for him, to no avail, he tries to call on his phone, nada nothing

meanwhile
upstairs the fucking is getting harder, piss, cum, dap.
the guys were so much for the bride that when they finish her off
she was laying on the floor, all full of cum and in a pool of piss, all she can do was smile, and give big smiles....
now the guys dress up quickly and they all went downstairs and opened the door saying to john, that there were living cause he fail to get the beers on time, to which john replied, I been here for 2 hours trying to get in, sorry john no beer we go, bye.

now john runs upstairs and finds his bride all drenched in piss and cum, with a big smile on her face.
John runs to the window and yells to the guys, you FMF. the END

https://www.analvids.com/watch/170187/s ... ow_gio2222

it is a great scene and 13 looks more beautiful than ever.

I pretend to get paid for this,

[Giorgio Grandi]

Slammed brides Goes Wet.

very nice scene and 13 looks fantastic.
the scene action is hot very hot.

I just wished, the scrit would have been more elaborated.

as this one.

John goes to the airport to pick up his bride, while all his friends are
waiting at the studio they rented, no other lady friend was in attendance
as they all were very mad at john, cause they tough that john was making a very bad decision, to get a bride from Colombia.

NARRATIVE
one of the girls said to john, ( for all you know she can be a fucking whore, please john don't do this to yourself, to which john, reply, I love her and she is so beautiful, and all my male friends like her, {{{ little did john knew that his lovely bride was doing face time with all his friends}}} and are very happy for me ). the girls looked at each other and then say to john, fuck yourself and don't even bother to invite us to your white wedding.....
................................................................................
back to the big day.
john is already on his way back from the airport, he is so happy, he calls his friends and shows them his bride over the phone, ill be there in 10 minutes
guys.
now the guy's, device a plan to get john away..

1 guy said, let's tell him his mother is sick and he needs to go to her house
2 other guys said, no, that shit sound stupid, just let's send him for beers
3 other guys said, how are we going to do that, for sure he won't want to leave his new bride all alone with us.
4 another guy replied, I got a brilliant idea, listen to it.

one of us is going to wait outside for john to arrive, once he parks his car, go to the passenger side and help the bride out, then immediately, tell john to go and get some beers, cause we are running low, then we gonna have her for ourselves. bring her inside and put all the locks on the door, so when john comes back, he won't be able to come

NARRATIVE
they went ahead with the plan as planned, now they got the bride
inside and poor john is buying beers at the store.

at first, the bride is reluctant to give in, to the guys' desires,
but gives in after seeing all those big cock, her only words were,
( what about john ) to wish the guy's reply, don't worry he is at the store and won't be able to get in, we put all the locks on the door, and she gave a big smile, and the fucking started.

30 minutes after.
john is desperately trying to open the door, and like a maniac yelling for the guys to hear him and come downstairs to open the door for him, to no avail, he tries to call on his phone, nada nothing

meanwhile
upstairs the fucking is getting harder, piss, cum, dap.
the guys were so much for the bride that when they finish her off
she was laying on the floor, all full of cum and in a pool of piss, all she can do was smile, and give big smiles....
now the guys dress up quickly and they all went downstairs and opened the door saying to john, that there were living cause he fail to get the beers on time, to which john replied, I been here for 2 hours trying to get in, sorry john no beer we go, bye.

now john runs upstairs and finds his bride all drenched in piss and cum, with a big smile on her face.
John runs to the window and yells to the guys, you FMF. the END

https://www.analvids.com/watch/170187/s ... ow_gio2222

it is a great scene and 13 looks more beautiful than ever.

I pretend to get paid for this,

Can I do it?

[Giorgio Grandi]

ho boy, ho boy, ho boy,

one more time master GG does it, in this new scene (movie)
you will immerse yourself as you have never had, it is a plot very well organized, the narrative is absolutely fantastic, and puts the story in motion for a brilliant performance
For those involved, this scene (movie, is more like a movie ) intro is spectacular, I was not expecting what I was hearing and seeing, it knocked me out of my chair.
GG deserves a grammy.

https://www.analvids.com/watch/112191/p ... ow_gio2296

[visigoth2020260]

of course GG you enlightened my day.
all rights go to you, it is yours.

did you know?
I was writing this with, not much hope, as you all know that my language is not English.
not hope for GG to like It, but hope for you guys to like it.
but I went ahead with it and I got the best, for GG to like it.

[Rafal1203]

Its nice to see GG listen the fans too bad its another full dickfest scene

Can you add more girls less dick in a scene just once please

Like 2 girls 1 guy kreme farting scene and hire Kid Jamaica to show how its done or use anyone but Dylan Brown

Maybe Yves Morgan or John Price

[visigoth2020260]

sloggers night out,
home runs none stop.
give the other studios a chance,

another excellent scene with an outstanding plot.
that girl is very nice, and her name is very unique, whao!, Fattolandia.

I am beginning to like the guy with the glasses, I think he acts so naturally.

GG hit it so hard it that landed in Fattolandia, I want to go there myself too,
to slug that ass.
super great scene. don't miss it, get it today, now, right now.

https://www.analvids.com/watch/124735/w ... llow_gl759

[visigoth2020260]

maria and Juliet woke
up just like any other day, as they
put on their holy garment, there was a

knock on the door, it was the sister

manuella informed them that the

mother superior wanted to see them at

once, soon after they both are at the

presence of the mother superior,
MS... I have called upon both of you as
something awful happened to a group of
local priests. it seems that at the

guesthouse they were staying in, somehow
as they were watching tv, all of the

sudden some pornographic material came

on the screen.
the guest's name is Mr GG and he calls

this morning informing me that the group
of priests have been glued to the tv
all naked and jerking off, and that he

has not been able to make them stop,

that it is as if they are in a trance

or some evil spirit has taken over

them as he himself has not been able

to turn off the tv set.
he has requested that I send someone

to enchant and deliver those priests

from that evil entrapment that they

are in.
so I have called upon you to go to this

house and do all you can to help this

poor souls.

first, go to the dungeons and get Jennifer. here is the ring of domination,
this ring will help you, to place her under your controll.

[Jynxlopez91]

NUNS INCANTATION
-------------------------------
maria and juliet woke
up just like any other day, as they
put on their holy garment, there was a

knock on the door, it was sister

manuella informing them that the

mother superior wanted to see them at

once, soon after they both are at the

presence of the mother superior,
MS...i have call upon both of you as
something awful happened to a group of
local priest. it seem that at the

guesthouse they where staying some how
as they where watching tv, all of the

sudden some pornografic material came

on the screen.
the guest name is mr GG and he call

this morning informing me tha the goup
of priest have been glued to the tv
all naked and jerking off, and that he

has not been able to make them stop,

that it is as if they are in a trance

or some evil spirit has taken over

them as he himself has not been able

tu turn off the tv set.
he has requested that i send someone

to enchant and deliver those priest

from that evil emptrapment that they

are in.
so i have call upon you to go to this

house and do all you can to help this

poor souls, but first you must take a

bottle of holly squirt, your holly,
to be continued.

This one be a perfect scene if put into reality. I am sure this will be top selling and 1st best of the year If GG will consider to shoot this that will be instant buy. But the scene shout be full of dirty talks not just moaning.

[visigoth2020260]

ill continue the one with the holly squirt, then
..........................................................
as mother's superior was about to finish her sentence.
sister Juliet said----- there is none left, we use it on the last assessment you send us to.

sister maria-----how are we going to get another bottle?

Mr superior look a both of them and smiles, sitting on a chair pulls up her garment and opens her legs, and instructs both sisters to eat her ass, so as to get the holly squirt.
things turn into a frenzy of a lesbian threesome, fisting, kissing, piss, huge dildos, tits sucking you name it.
finally, the sisters got their bottle of holly squit.

now on the way to Mr. GG's house to deliver the priests.
........................................................................
show the nuns walking in the street, and talking among themselves, taking great care to show them in full paying special attention to their faces and garments. nun in high heels?
..................................................................................................

once they arrive Mr gg lets them in, and they go up to the jerking priests who are glued to a pornographic movie, jerking, the sisters immediately run into action, saying words from a deliverance book and throwing holy squirt at the priests, but he priest continues in the same stage,
now the sisters get naked stands next to the tv set and start showing their asses but nothing, now they start to dildo their asses but nothing happens,

the sisters talk among themselves,
we must be doing something wrong,
maria.....read the fucking book.
Juliet......yes, hand me the book.

they open the book and go to the last page,

warning.. to be used in extreme circumstances, when everything else fails.

maria.... come on, read on, we got nothing to lose.

to be continued in a bit, as I do this spontaneously, sometimes I get burned, let me take some fresh air, ill be back.

[visigoth2020260]

this sisters will do anythig for a poor lost soul.
what will they do for a bunch of lost souls?

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let's look at the scenario before we continued.
priest in a trance glued to their sits jerking vigorously to a porn movie on the tv,
nuns in lingerie still wearing their headpieces, reading the book
of deliverance.
sis maria... please read it, what does it say.
sis Juliet... this book is evil, listen sister maria.



Chapter XII book of deliverance.
delivering priest from evil spirits.
before you start have sister Juliet fill the Kings Cup with piss.
this is very important, for the deliverance to work.
............................................................
holding the book, kneel in front of the priests, and recite these words, as fallow,

First, recite: in a loud voice.
seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.
if recited properly, the tv should turn off and the priest should all stand up and lay on the floor next to each other.

recite three times, in a loud voice as sister maria is standing on top of the priests and pissing on them one by one or as many as she can aim her piss at.....she may begin to piss on them only after the first recite, not before or it won't work...

in a loud voice, recite.
1)...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

2...)seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

3) ...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

now drink the Kings Cup
and go join the other sister and piss on the priests as well,
taking the emptied cup and filling it and making Juliet drink it.
( this is where you'll get your powers for what is coming) .

the sisters did as the book stated, and everything went as follows.
the priests came out of their trace with their vigorously cocks erectile as a candle waiting to be melted, the sister got on their knees and started a frenzy head game on the priests, which turned into DAP, ATM, PISS GALORE, from all angles, piss from ass to girls face, it was something unbelievable.
now the sisters were the ones in a trance. screaming, wanting more and more insatiable as hell.
when all was done, as the priests were putting on their garments, the sister wanted more they were kissing, eating each other's ass
pussy, and tits saying profane words, and begging the priests to keep on fucking them, they even started to fervently dildo their pussy-es and ass, cumming as they pull it out begging the priests not to go but the priests knew they needed to go and get some help for this poor insatiable souls.
the end.
...........................................
if possible show the priest walking in line, humbly out of the house onto the street. this is to show their garments and sandals.
a nice ending touch so I think.
..................................................................................

hope everyone likes it. and gets involved.

How many guys should be in this scene?
Which girls do you think are the ones for this scene?
Who should play mother superior?
come on have some fun, and answer these questions.

but it is only for master GG to decide.

[Jynxlopez91]

índiceq.jpg

let's look at the scenario before we continued.
priest in a trance glued to their sits jerking vigorously to a porn movie on the tv,
nuns in lingerie still wearing their headpieces, reading the book
of deliverance.
sis maria... please read it, what does it say.
sis Juliet... this book is evil, listen sister maria.



Chapter XII book of deliverance.
delivering priest from evil spirits.
before you start have sister Juliet fill the Kings Cup with piss.
this is very important, for the deliverance to work.
............................................................
holding the book, kneel in front of the priests, and recite these words, as fallow,

First, recite: in a loud voice.
seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.
if recited properly, the tv should turn off and the priest should all stand up and lay on the floor next to each other.

recite three times, in a loud voice as sister maria is standing on top of the priests and pissing on them one by one or as many as she can aim her piss at.....she may begin to piss on them only after the first recite, not before or it won't work...

in a loud voice, recite.
1)...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

2...)seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

3) ...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

now drink the Kings Cup
and go join the other sister and piss on the priests as well,
taking the emptied cup and filling it and making Juliet drink it.
( this is where you'll get your powers for what is coming) .

the sisters did as the book stated, and everything went as follows.
the priests came out of their trace with their vigorously cocks erectile as a candle waiting to be melted, the sister got on their knees and started a frenzy head game on the priests, which turned into DAP, ATM, PISS GALORE, from all angles, piss from ass to girls face, it was something unbelievable.
now the sisters were the ones in a trance. screaming, wanting more and more insatiable as hell.
when all was done, as the priests were putting on their garments, the sister wanted more they were kissing, eating each other's ass
pussy, and tits saying profane words, and begging the priests to keep on fucking them, they even started to fervently dildo their pussy-es and ass, cumming as they pull it out begging the priests not to go but the priests knew they needed to go and get some help for this poor insatiable souls.
the end.
...........................................
if possible show the priest walking in line, humbly out of the house onto the street. this is to show their garments and sandals.
a nice ending touch so I think.
..................................................................................

hope everyone likes it. and gets involved.

How many guys should be in this scene?
Which girls do you think are the ones for this scene?
Who should play mother superior?
come on have some fun, and answer these questions.

but it is only for master GG to decide.

Amazing its need to be created. Please Ask GG to Shoot the scene it will be amazing.

[visigoth2020260]

thank you, no need to ask him, once he sees it,
and if he likes it. He will let us know. if not he will stay quiet.
so let's cross our fingers.

[Giorgio Grandi]

índiceq.jpg

let's look at the scenario before we continued.
priest in a trance glued to their sits jerking vigorously to a porn movie on the tv,
nuns in lingerie still wearing their headpieces, reading the book
of deliverance.
sis maria... please read it, what does it say.
sis Juliet... this book is evil, listen sister maria.



Chapter XII book of deliverance.
delivering priest from evil spirits.
before you start have sister Juliet fill the Kings Cup with piss.
this is very important, for the deliverance to work.
............................................................
holding the book, kneel in front of the priests, and recite these words, as fallow,

First, recite: in a loud voice.
seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.
if recited properly, the tv should turn off and the priest should all stand up and lay on the floor next to each other.

recite three times, in a loud voice as sister maria is standing on top of the priests and pissing on them one by one or as many as she can aim her piss at.....she may begin to piss on them only after the first recite, not before or it won't work...

in a loud voice, recite.
1)...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

2...)seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

3) ...seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all.

now drink the Kings Cup
and go join the other sister and piss on the priests as well,
taking the emptied cup and filling it and making Juliet drink it.
( this is where you'll get your powers for what is coming) .

the sisters did as the book stated, and everything went as follows.
the priests came out of their trace with their vigorously cocks erectile as a candle waiting to be melted, the sister got on their knees and started a frenzy head game on the priests, which turned into DAP, ATM, PISS GALORE, from all angles, piss from ass to girls face, it was something unbelievable.
now the sisters were the ones in a trance. screaming, wanting more and more insatiable as hell.
when all was done, as the priests were putting on their garments, the sister wanted more they were kissing, eating each other's ass
pussy, and tits saying profane words, and begging the priests to keep on fucking them, they even started to fervently dildo their pussy-es and ass, cumming as they pull it out begging the priests not to go but the priests knew they needed to go and get some help for this poor insatiable souls.
the end.
...........................................
if possible show the priest walking in line, humbly out of the house onto the street. this is to show their garments and sandals.
a nice ending touch so I think.
..................................................................................

hope everyone likes it. and gets involved.

How many guys should be in this scene?
Which girls do you think are the ones for this scene?
Who should play mother superior?
come on have some fun, and answer these questions.

but it is only for master GG to decide.

I arranged the script and added to the program for a scene, but I need some help
"now the sisters were the ones in a trance. screaming, wanting more and more insatiable as hell."
Give me some example, something intense like your "seeing that they tarried over long, hee at their coming enjoyned them all to a pennance, which was, that she should piss on them all"