Help me be better!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby netzerkaiser » Fri Mar 01, 2024 1:28 pm

Your work is generally amazing. I've bought a lot of your scenes. Just one thing, personally I wish you'd stop referencing God. A lot of people would sneer at me for saying this, but they shouldn't, its just a personal view, that should be respected just like I would respect their views. Maybe leave God out of it?

Otherwise you have brought in so many attractive girls, & your camerawork is excellent. I'm glad you seem to be doing well with your sales. I love English girls too, & you've so many of them. Good luck to you. You have one of the best sites here, & I wish you more success still.

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Postby parlam3nt » Tue Mar 05, 2024 3:09 am

Hello brother, I see your making a good content. I love the girls, especially latest scene Nausi love, just so beautiful, tall with the large mouth, just like need. To be honest, I don't think you have really big cock but it's not disrespectful or anything like this. It's just realistically they should be taking balls in the mouth at the same time really. Next is dildos, there is a way to having 3 at the same time especially with Nausi, large mouth. Basically first goes inside right on the side than another one to another side and stretch with it to the sides than middle bit is free for third one. That's the trick. I know these things so models doesn't say it's not possible. It doesn't go inside 3 at the same time. So that's another request. Next one is deep hand and stick the tongue out maximum. Raise eyebrows, face look a bit shocked and surprised. Next, before they are getting your cock, so they show their mouth wide open as possible and stretch the mouth cheeks to the sides with fingers, basically each hand 1 and 1 finger than upgrade to 2 and 2 probably until 4 and 4. Especially in doggy style when you fuck them but could be any position., like on the floor. Here is examples with pics. Next is more like unreal request, it's not like illegal, in Europe it's allowed but not really a lot doing this. Some of Legalporno had it before, it's foot in the mouth, girl to girl and dominant talk. It's loads you can find at internet. I'm having this stuff from sites with girls online. I'm paying them usually per pvt around £70 when I actually could buy scene with this 10 minutes for just a 9 dollars. But I do respect my girls, so they make my wishes I pay them. I mentioned this lots of times but lp studios are really doesn't care so have to do by myself. Whoever thinks this isn,'t normal, lots of popular models doing this stuff now as it's popular, and man does like this. Everyone has their opinion. I love female feet connection with the beautiful mouth so. I'm in heaven. If you don't want to post here, let me know we can chat directly and find a solution as I'm buying this on a basic not like rarely. Also you can put your price for it with any you want up to £70 as I'm paying that for the girls. if it's only for me. If for everyone, don't think they will really buy it for that price might give them a discount :D. Thank you. Hope on your feedback.
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby parlam3nt » Tue Mar 05, 2024 3:19 am

Oh and by the way I highly recommend Colombian or Brazil girls, they usually well behaved and they have a large mouth, so that makes easier for everyone.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Kslvt » Sat Mar 16, 2024 11:39 pm

Toby I have a big problem with your studio

I was loaded yesterday with nearly a dozen scenes on your page, scenes that I have NEVER bought.
When I logged in today, I saw that I had lost almost 90 tickets and by consulting my history i see a lot scenes from you
How can this be? I've NEVER made these purchases, what does that mean?
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Postby parlam3nt » Thu Mar 28, 2024 3:51 am

Nice one mate, I see difference much better latest scene with baby kitten, but she is the best, hopefully with another models get so lucky :D lipstick bit tomuch but it's fine. Stretching, loved. Also she done It many times, I love her for that, that she does different type of requests, and she agrees on anything. Brave and amazing model. Young and so good. Top for me. Anyways good luck and have fun ;) thank you team.
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby pastaga » Sat Apr 20, 2024 4:05 am

Thank you Toby for the nice new scenes with nice new (moreor less alt) girls !
One of the best studios at the moment who relies on creatiovity and not on DAP.
May you continue this way ! And I hope to see Brisen again !
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Postby parlam3nt » Fri Apr 26, 2024 1:37 am

Hey mate, amazing content! Each time better and better. I love this girl, so challenging, wide open big mouth, just wow, perfect. I wish all be so motivated! Loved stretched cheeks, yes please ! Having this scene soon. ;) more this type. But add dildos in the scene please, like some medium ones which they can try to deepthroat a bit and somewhere in the between, let them suck it while you fuck them or whatever. Also they can work a bit with them, like having 2-3 in the same time in the mouth. I have lots of my girls in private. It's not really hard if you know the tricks but the trick Is, one by one and push with them to the sides then middle bit is open for third one. Also sticking tongue under, raise eyebrows, stretch cheeks with each hand one finger, either is middle finger or pointing finger, then can upgrade to each hand two fingers, then three and four. ;) don't stick tongue out together with open, leave open first so can see inside, then take out maximum out, raise eyebrows make it look crazy, also move with lips so can see top teeth, also can stretch with two fingers on one hand, pointing finger and a thumb,two fingers inside one to the left one to the right, then open mouth, same fingers, and when you stretch it, so one finger goes up pointing finger i mean, then thumb goes down and push lips this way. However I'm sorry for so much information, just thoughts, what I do really love to see here that's all. Hope on your understanding, just a bit of practice to make it perfect mate. Good luck. Excited for the upcoming scenes. ;)
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Kslvt » Sat Jun 01, 2024 12:56 pm

I love Toby's recruitment over the last few weeks...beautiful Latina and exotic women with wet throats...it's perfect :cool:
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby jaxsonm75 » Wed Jul 10, 2024 7:33 pm

Hello Toby just writing to you some of my opinions for your studio and scenes.

To start, please reduce or change the makeup style on the girls. The overdone bright makeup looks like a clown on the girls who are otherwise very pretty. I think the ruined makeup with the spit/puke would look even better if the makeup is more subtle, rather than so overdone.

More scenes with 2 girls, teen+MILF combo is absolutely amazing, seeing a teen licking a milf's gapes or vice versa

More anal creampies/piss in ass to glass drinking, preferably in threesome scenes

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Bunt » Fri Jul 12, 2024 9:07 am

Holy shit! The scene with Nurian Millan (PISS-SPEW Recycling - ANAL WHORE Nurian Millan hardest ever throatfuck, slapped HARD, dominated severely) is the best scene ever. Outstanding. Can't get past 10 minutes without losing it. Please make more like this, using hot women like Nurian. How to make this even better? Bring two equally hot women into the scene, and have them drink each other's piss puke. Even better, have them start by drinking each other's piss (not yours this time...sorry, LOL), and have them spew up each other's piss, swap bowls, drink and repeat...and repeat...and repeat.

I vote for Nuria & Ria Sunn.

Fuck...Get the Dellai twins to do this and you'll break every record in the books!

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Postby xxxVIPERxxx » Sat Jul 20, 2024 9:33 pm

xxxVIPERxxx wrote:To Toby Dick Studio,

You ask on here for suggestions on how to be better. I have watched your studio and your work closely, with some of your scenes on LPAV (around 10% of them purchased).
Here are some recommendations, which will certainly make me buy your scenes more:

1) The girls you have are actually really hot. Consider styling them and glamming them up better. You do this well in some scenes, but not in all scenes.
2) I think asking the girls to wear stocking/lingerie, and wear sexy heels and keeping them on for the majority of the scene will help your popularity.
3) I love the look of your glans, and the use of a cock ring. However, get the girls to lick/tongue your ass and especially to RIM you for longer.
4) The blowjobs and deepthroating are enjoyable to see, but try to get the girls to puke, and piss puke more often when your cock is rammed down their throats.
5) You spit on the girls faces, tits, and body which are hot to see...consider spreading that wet play all over their faces and ruining their make-up later on in the scene, for every scene.
6) Your style of scene is similar to Max Hardcore, the girl is the star of the show. Glamourise the girl, and get her to do a little striptease dance for a few minutes as foreplay for the start of the scene.
7) Do not hit the girls' asses so hard and so much, that they become red and bruised.
8) Consider fucking their asses so they give an anal gape on screen.
9) There are a lot of toys e.g. lipstick drawing on girls, speculum on the ass, plastic tubing from the ass to mouth, etc that you can use similar to how Max Hardcore treated his girls.
10) Aim for a scene that is 40-55 minutes long. you have some scenes around the 25-35 minute range which seems a bit short for what you are trying to achieve.

A lot of your work is quite decent, and many scenes I am close to buying but just has that final part which holds me back and makes me say that it is not an insta-buy.

Anyway, those are my personal thoughts. The rest is up to you. Good luck!


Thank you to listening to some of my suggestions...I noticed it, and appreciate it xxx

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Postby Valdor869 » Fri Sep 27, 2024 9:19 pm

Huge fan of your work. This one is a long shot since she hasn’t done your kind of content before but she is one to keep track of. Khali Noire. She has just started back in porn after a long break. She’s absolutely stunning and it would be incredible to see you use her in the future.

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Postby xxxVIPERxxx » Sat Sep 28, 2024 11:17 am

I love the sight of a much older man, fucking a young, hot, sexy girl.

I guess you could say it was Max Hardcore who really got me in to this genre of old man, with a young woman.

Your scenes are good, certainly improving.
I would love to see you slapping the girls' faces more.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby harrirov248 » Tue Oct 01, 2024 10:14 am

Honestly, your porn is my favorite one right now. Keep it up, as hard as the girls can take.
I'm loving the Spanish girls, they're all super slutty, keep shooting with them.
Special mention for Emejota, she doesn't let herself be pissed on, at the moment, but in return she doesn't have a problem with being slapped very hard

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby greeneg2017 » Thu Oct 10, 2024 12:43 am

More recycling with Nuria Millan. Bring her back and see how much she can take.

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Postby meatfist » Thu Dec 19, 2024 3:38 am

Your scene with Jazmine White and Sophia Smith sisters was near perfect. You just have to facefuck them while pissing down their throats till they puke. RIP Max Hardcore. Long live the king of porn.
Fuck whores. That's all we can do.

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Postby dap-addict » Thu Dec 19, 2024 12:12 pm

netzerkaiser wrote:Your work is generally amazing. I've bought a lot of your scenes. Just one thing, personally I wish you'd stop referencing God. A lot of people would sneer at me for saying this, but they shouldn't, it's just a personal view, that should be respected just like I would respect their views. Maybe leave God out of it?

Late thumbs up for Netzer on this!
Also not only users but quite a few porn girls are practicing Christians, some are actually in practice also good ones, lest alone other religions, it's really just a personal choice.


Btw, Toby, for me less p*ke but more eye-pops please! Thanks!
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