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xxxVIPERxxx wrote:To Toby Dick Studio,
You ask on here for suggestions on how to be better. I have watched your studio and your work closely, with some of your scenes on LPAV (around 10% of them purchased).
Here are some recommendations, which will certainly make me buy your scenes more:
1) The girls you have are actually really hot. Consider styling them and glamming them up better. You do this well in some scenes, but not in all scenes.
2) I think asking the girls to wear stocking/lingerie, and wear sexy heels and keeping them on for the majority of the scene will help your popularity.
3) I love the look of your glans, and the use of a cock ring. However, get the girls to lick/tongue your ass and especially to RIM you for longer.
4) The blowjobs and deepthroating are enjoyable to see, but try to get the girls to puke, and piss puke more often when your cock is rammed down their throats.
5) You spit on the girls faces, tits, and body which are hot to see...consider spreading that wet play all over their faces and ruining their make-up later on in the scene, for every scene.
6) Your style of scene is similar to Max Hardcore, the girl is the star of the show. Glamourise the girl, and get her to do a little striptease dance for a few minutes as foreplay for the start of the scene.
7) Do not hit the girls' asses so hard and so much, that they become red and bruised.
8) Consider fucking their asses so they give an anal gape on screen.
9) There are a lot of toys e.g. lipstick drawing on girls, speculum on the ass, plastic tubing from the ass to mouth, etc that you can use similar to how Max Hardcore treated his girls.
10) Aim for a scene that is 40-55 minutes long. you have some scenes around the 25-35 minute range which seems a bit short for what you are trying to achieve.
A lot of your work is quite decent, and many scenes I am close to buying but just has that final part which holds me back and makes me say that it is not an insta-buy.
Anyway, those are my personal thoughts. The rest is up to you. Good luck!
netzerkaiser wrote:Your work is generally amazing. I've bought a lot of your scenes. Just one thing, personally I wish you'd stop referencing God. A lot of people would sneer at me for saying this, but they shouldn't, it's just a personal view, that should be respected just like I would respect their views. Maybe leave God out of it?
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