hello pl.
https://www.analvids.com/watch/85803/_w ... ap_swallow
first i most say that your lighting is good
your idea is good,
and you have an studio, something that others producer do not have including YUMMY.
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your camera work is ok but what is with that sudden movements like you are bumping into it or you hace some kind of shaking syndrome and you are trying hard to stay stable (wtf).
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is is very important to show case the girls a bit more and show them in full for much longer.
and the girl that is presenting the other girl should do a full showcase of all her atires and parts for the camera.
need to work out this issues specially the camera bump, shaking syndrome.
you almost got it made.