I continue my rambling about how you can make good porn great.
This is about Cum Swallowing.
It is important that the girl is enthusiastic or if it is a roleplay she can be disgusted but must not be indifferent like another day at the job. She should suck eagerly, not just head bobbing but really suck and then get a big load with the dick in her mouth so she need to swallow three times. Even better if it is a throatpie i.e. deep throat while ejaculating. It is much better when the girls finish off. Who wants to see guys jerking off for several minutes? They do this very well in Gloryhole scenes, but you don't need the wall. Having two girls taking turns trying to "win" is great.
An alternative is to shoot big streams of semen into the girls mouth while she is holding the dick herself. Nothing worse than a guy jerking and swinging his dick all over and then miss the target. At least 90% of the cum should go into the girls mouth. Facials are a waste unless she gets it in the beginning of the scene and keep it during the scene.
If she gets several loads in her mouth it is better to swallow inbetween. I like to watch the swallowing, so to collect many loads before swallowing is not the best.
Anal creampie swallowing is always great.