Gonzo Halloween Scene (VERY poor directing)

[Dominator]

The Gonzo Halloween scene had SO MUCH promise! Three great, submissive, young anal performers (Natasha Teen, Emily Pink & Laura), plus two big-dick studs (Chris Diamond & Vinny Star).. Great looking costumes to go with the Halloween theme. I personally loved Emily's outfit, as well as her make-up and scary contact lenses, which made her look more mature and less like a barely legal teen.

Multiple girl scenes have become rare these days, so you can imagine my delight when I saw this scene become available last night.. But MAAAAAAN, what a disappointment of a scene! The poor utilization of the multiple female models was beyond frustrating.. It really had me scratching my head trying to figure out what the fuck LP is trying to accomplish here.

Now, I'm a big fan of Luis (assuming he directed it), so this is NOT a knock on him personally. He has produced/directed countless great scenes, and his resume is solid and speaks for itself. But someone please explain to me why Emily Pink was off in the corner eating pussy and dildo-fucking an asshole off camera for huge portions of the this scene? One girl is getting DP'd, and the other two are off camera doing basically nothing stroke worthy. Where was the ATOGM? There was ONE sequence of decent ATOGM with Laura sucking Vinny's dick from Emily's ass 3 times in a row, but that was it FOR THE WHOLE SCENE!!! Even then, she was not even positioned properly, making it awkward and disjointed. And even when there was an attempt to show some ATOGM, the models' heads were BLOCKING THE CAMERA from viewing the action! Laura goes to lick Emily's gape and we get served a view of the back of her head.. WTF!!! Set them up on the FAR SIDE of the girl being fucked so we can see the action, not in front. Jesus... where is the direction??

Chris Diamond's thigh was blocking the shot of him penetrating Natasha's ass in missionary for nearly that entire sequence, yet it was just allowed to continue. And then you have Natasha rubbing and fingering Laura's pussy when Chris pulled out, again blocking the shot of her gape. Plus every time Chris pulled out Laura's ass for Natasha to suck it, she reaches out with her hand to grab the dick. She's supposed to keep her hands on the other girl's ass keeping it spread open, not touching the cock and obstructing the shot. Fucking on camera is different than fucking in real life. Don't let the models block the fucking camera from capturing the action!!! This is so basic, I shouldn't even have to say it.

To make it even more frustrating is you have a hugely submissive slut like Laura who actually giggled excitedly when Vinny fed her his cock from Emily's ass, but she gets literally no more proper ATOGM for the rest of the scene! How was this opportunity missed? What are you guys thinking??? Enough with this occasional, single serving of ATOGM every few minutes crap.. that's old hat and does little to arouse. Do it properly (at least 3 times in a row with no hands) or don't do it at all.

And then to top it off, at the end of the scene we get served TWO WHOLE MINUTES of Chris Diamond JERKING HIMSELF OFF to a cumshot.. WHAT. THE. FUCK... Leave that shit on the editing room floor. In case you guys have forgotten, your customers are jerking off to these videos. I think I speak for most when I say that we do NOT want to watch a guy jerk himself off to completion for more than a few seconds. Edit that shit out.

I'm a long time fan and supporter of LP. Been around since 2013, and I have purchased over 1100 scenes. But this scene, considering what it could have been given the level of talent, was simply put, a SLOPPY and POORLY EXECUTED mess. You guys are better than this, and your customers deserve more planned and thoughtful content. It's not enough to just let the camera roll and record the models fucking. It can't just be a free-for-all, especially when you're dealing with inexperienced female models. I can make these same exact arguments against the Gonzo 2-on-5 Colombia orgy scene, which was also a sloppy disappointment considering what could have been. The new chicks need to be instructed and trained about performing on camera. They literally look like they don't know what they're supposed to be doing and/or how. There needs to be a greater level of input from the director. When you don't do that, your content suffers and your customers will not be pleased.

[ultimo]

I generally don't like scenes with multiple girls because usually I will only like one of them and the camera doesn't focus on her and will just pan around. I absolutely lust for Emily Pink and do not want the camera to go off of her at all.
As to the long jerk off segment:While I agree with you that is isn't what I want to watch my girlfriend thinks Chris is very hot ( let me quote her ) "exquisite god bod" (she loves his huge thick cock) and she loved seeing him stroke his huge dick.
It isn't just us guys watching these videos.

[Dominator]

Chris is obviously a very attractive guy. That’s not the point, no one is disputing that. He’s my favorite male performer in the entire business. But 2 entire minutes of watching any guy jerk off is unacceptable and shows negligence and laziness by the editing staff. I’m sure there are women out there watching LP videos who may enjoy such a display, but the vast majority of customers are heterosexual men. Two minutes is just way too excessive.

[Jocke]

Thank you Dominator for taking the time to write this very accurate critique. I concur completely.
I had the same hope and accepted to pay a little extra for a multi girl treat, but this was amateurish to say the least.

[pastaga]

Funny, the video they did for xvideos, which is free, is almost better :
https://fr.xvideos.com/video51820791/ha ... emily_pink

[Dominator]

Jesus Christ... that free Xvideos scene IS better than this LP scene which costed over 6 tickets!

I had no idea some of the performers release their own videos for free like that. Are there other examples of this?

[drevokocur66]

One look at preview of the Halloween releases had me yawning. Just embarrassing.

[Dominator]

^^^Agreed. In the end, it amounts to a complete waste of top-level talent.

[Sr_VarillaRigida]

Very poor Halloween party/orgy decorating too. Don't even bother decorating if you're just gonna half-ass it like that. Booooo.

[Dominator]

^^^Half-ass is a very accurate way to describe what's being done here. It seems like the mentality at times is "hey we have the talent let's just let them fuck and shoot it and we will automatically have the best content." It just doesn't work that way.