Hi Jordan,
welcome to the forum. I really appreciate your interest. Yeah, sometimes critic posts may sound harsh here, but please don't take it personal, this is normal here and 99% time it's meant in a good way. People posting here are very passionate about their best anal porn site

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Bellow I summed it up for the beginning of your work , it may look like many points, but if you get used to it during further shooting it would be very easy.
I dare to say, people posting here suggestions and constructive critic help to make far better scenes and the most exciting anal porn if producers or directors would listen.
So far:
- camera is very busy (not steady, shaky), smoother movement is desired
- lack of more direct frontal (en face) shots, especially during middle / closeup shots (ie pussy/ass licking, penetration, gape), btw. side or diagonal view is a cancer these days
- don't keep one type of a shot during one take, cut in between some close ups or extreme close ups or move the camera for a closeup and back to middle, wider shot (it's actually so so, but needs improvement)
- keep in one shot (preferably middle close up with girl's face in the shot as well) the beginning or ending of a particular penetration or position (thus we can see dick going in or out)
- more ass play especially during solo/lesbo intro, like butt cheeks massaging, ass fingering, anal toys (butt plugs, anal dildos), asshole finger stretching
- anal not intense enough
- more DP and especially DAP!
- more wide gaping
- squirting is not necessary in every scene but when possible very welcome!
- longer endings with swallowing and anal creampies
- more rimjobs (guy and girl)
- shoot like if the girls were posing to the camera
- girls are the center of everything, avoid to stick guy's ass, legs, arms, whatever other than dick in from of the camera
Finally I use graphical depicting suggestion from one my older posts