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Help me be better!

Postby TobyDick » Wed May 04, 2022 1:20 pm

Hi Forumites!

I hope you're enjoying my content.

Posting here to ask for your advice and requests to help make my content even better. Im very open to suggestions!

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Postby dap-addict » Wed May 04, 2022 5:51 pm

So far there is very little 0% pussy.
I'd check you offerings more if I was sure to get a good dose of anal sex.
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby TobyDick » Thu May 05, 2022 2:43 am

Very good point! I have about 10 scenes in my edit backlog right now and many are 0% pussy! I shot with Lara Lee today and, yes, it's all anal and throat!

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Postby xxxVIPERxxx » Thu May 05, 2022 4:29 pm

Hi Toby, consider glamourising the girls up a bit more. Improved make-up and costume, sexy high heels/boots.

Get girls who are willing to do more, have a good attitude and are open to developing their porn careers. I think you are marketing yourself as like an European version of HUHS. On there, they usually get girls BEFORE they become really famous, and they are willing to do puke, rimming, extreme anal, speculums, intense deepthroat etc.

That would be a great way for you to become better, and that will in turn lead to increased sales.

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Postby TobyDick » Thu May 05, 2022 9:45 pm

xxxVIPERxxx wrote:Hi Toby, consider glamourising the girls up a bit more. Improved make-up and costume, sexy high heels/boots.

Get girls who are willing to do more, have a good attitude and are open to developing their porn careers. I think you are marketing yourself as like an European version of HUHS. On there, they usually get girls BEFORE they become really famous, and they are willing to do puke, rimming, extreme anal, speculums, intense deepthroat etc.

That would be a great way for you to become better, and that will in turn lead to increased sales.


Thanks xxxVIPERxxx! That's great feedback. Have been investing in a lot more props, etc. Makeup is something I'm trying to get better at and outfits for sure.

Talent is obviously a challenge. I got banned from Twitter earlier this year. Proper, uber ban. But I think I'm around that now. And Twitter is great for finding talent here so hopefully that will pay dividends.

Always working harder and harder to get better!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby dirtporn » Fri May 06, 2022 11:35 am

Hi Toby,

personnaly, i love your style of porn and you used a lot of practice that i love (rough, rimming, face fuck, saliva, ...).

I especially love threesome scene with 2 girls. Very excicting but i dream to see several things which are perfect with your style.

- Grabbing ankles during face fuck;
- foot sucking between girls while they are fucked, especially if you put a girl's big toe in other girl's mouth when you fucked them (always with sole view). Too rare;-).
- Many views on girl's asshole
- girls crawling with asshole and soles view.

I hope that you will can inspired

Keep up the great work.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby mugaserdifo » Fri May 06, 2022 10:49 pm

love your scenes with Jessika Taylor where she does dirty ATM. so fucking nasty. would love to see more like those.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby vincenzow » Sun May 08, 2022 11:58 am

i hope you get to facefuck and rough up Alexxa Vice bro

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby kkk_hh89 » Sat May 14, 2022 6:24 am

Would be great to add cock/balls sniffing or sniffing the ass during rimming, so hot... Gabriella Paltrova often does this.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Vancouver » Tue May 24, 2022 10:51 am

Would be nice to get Echo back and pair her with Louise Lee. I think you can do some pretty wild things in this scenario.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby jonnye1 » Sun May 29, 2022 1:54 pm

Where have all the amazing puke scenes gone!? Deleted?

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby TobyDick » Fri Jun 03, 2022 1:32 am

jonnye1 wrote:Where have all the amazing puke scenes gone!? Deleted?

Guessing so... boooo

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby TobyDick » Fri Jun 03, 2022 1:33 am

kkk_hh89 wrote:Would be great to add cock/balls sniffing or sniffing the ass during rimming, so hot... Gabriella Paltrova often does this.

Got a scene shot with some incredible ass sniffing coming up! She basically breathes from my ass!

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Postby TobyDick » Fri Jun 03, 2022 1:34 am

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kkk_hh89 wrote:Would be great to add cock/balls sniffing or sniffing the ass during rimming, so hot... Gabriella Paltrova often does this.

Got a scene shot with some incredible ass sniffing coming up! It's Rokky Horror. The girl basically breathes from my ass!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby bucyc007 » Thu Jun 30, 2022 4:06 am

Good balls deep blowjob content! As it should be...

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Postby petermc934 » Mon Jul 04, 2022 3:53 pm

Love your stuff, big fan of hard face slapping especially whilst fucking in missionary. Love the piss in mouth and puke bjs as well.

Whilst not my favourite model, I loved how disgusting that Cherry Feathers scene was with tons of proper disgusting puke (not a fan of the milk/milkshake puking, doesn’t look as nasty) so would love to see more like that. Have the girl eat a big meal and then throat fuck her whilst she pukes it up on your dick. Then fill her back up with piss and have her puke that back up!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby bucyc007 » Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:53 am

Grace is very obedient. She’s a gem. Congratulations, Toby.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Vancouver » Tue Jul 26, 2022 3:16 am

just got a Bluelah Scene (the throat bulge pissing one).

you have a winner here, one of my favorite scenes of yours so far. We need more of this smoking hot goddess.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby mikespersonalproductions » Tue Aug 02, 2022 12:55 pm

Hi Toby

I'm enjoying some of your stuff.

But please think about changing 2 things up.

POV is terrible if you actually want to see what's happening. As is zooming in too close.

Your side angle shots are great but the overall framing with POV and too much zoom lets things down IMO.

I'd rather see what's happening.

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Postby Rafal1203 » Wed Aug 03, 2022 4:49 am

mikespersonalproductions wrote:Hi Toby

I'm enjoying some of your stuff.

But please think about changing 2 things up.

POV is terrible if you actually want to see what's happening. As is zooming in too close.

Your side angle shots are great but the overall framing with POV and too much zoom lets things down IMO.

I'd rather see what's happening.


No way POV shot are the best just bought like 10 scenes because of it dont change it or Im out you doing great you have your own style its nice for a change

I also like the spit on face and mouth so hot do it more and would be amazing to have shot with huge gape and wink asshole

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Postby drevokocur66 » Sun Aug 21, 2022 5:32 am

Purchased 3 latest scenes to check it out and...

You can't just show stream of liquid, the cock has to be visible. If we start doing that, it will be no time before GIO starts using squirt guns.
Be responsible with tags. Don't include the tag if the action is not in the scene.
Way too hectic camera cuts and switches, at the worst possible moments.
Bad camera angles, your ass is covering up the action.
Stop zooming into the girls faces, away from the action. Gio does that for fake creampies, well fake just about anything. Zoom out so we can see face and the action.
ATM ATOGM ATP, ATOGP cuts and lousy edits. STOP IT.
The camera is just little too much zoomed into the action. Better angles would also help.
Shave some body hair and maybe some spray on tan.

Deep throat is great!
Love the deep stroke fucking!
Prostate massage was HOT, and she licked her fingers... AWESOME
The scenes don't look like checklist porn, fun to watch, minus the hectic cuts and edits.
Stacking the girls looked great, please make most of it. ass to other girl's ass, ass to other girl's pussy.
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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Johannesmehlig » Sun Aug 21, 2022 4:30 pm

When it comes down to requests it would be awesome of you could shoot alyssa divine!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby Johannesmehlig » Sun Aug 21, 2022 4:43 pm

When it comes down to requests it would be awesome if you could shoot alyssa divine!

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Postby London Boy » Sun Aug 21, 2022 5:05 pm

TobyDick wrote:Hi Forumites!

I hope you're enjoying my content.

Posting here to ask for your advice and requests to help make my content even better. Im very open to suggestions!

Hi Toby , I want to congratulate you , it’s so refreshing to see somebody in the UK creating this type of filth , totally get you are working hard on this and I’m sure will get better as you go on . Keep up the great work flying the uk flag

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Postby Rafal1203 » Tue Aug 23, 2022 8:07 pm

drevokocur66 wrote:Purchased 3 latest scenes to check it out and...

You can't just show stream of liquid, the cock has to be visible. If we start doing that, it will be no time before GIO starts using squirt guns.
Be responsible with tags. Don't include the tag if the action is not in the scene.
Way too hectic camera cuts and switches, at the worst possible moments.
Bad camera angles, your ass is covering up the action.
Stop zooming into the girls faces, away from the action. Gio does that for fake creampies, well fake just about anything. Zoom out so we can see face and the action.
ATM ATOGM ATP, ATOGP cuts and lousy edits. STOP IT.
The camera is just little too much zoomed into the action. Better angles would also help.
Shave some body hair and maybe some spray on tan.

Deep throat is great!
Love the deep stroke fucking!
Prostate massage was HOT, and she licked her fingers... AWESOME
The scenes don't look like checklist porn, fun to watch, minus the hectic cuts and edits.
Stacking the girls looked great, please make most of it. ass to other girl's ass, ass to other girl's pussy.


most of it I agree but the zoom in face its hot tho I like seeing girls face zoomed in for pov face fucking

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Postby kkk_hh89 » Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:00 pm

TobyDick wrote:
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kkk_hh89 wrote:Would be great to add cock/balls sniffing or sniffing the ass during rimming, so hot... Gabriella Paltrova often does this.

Got a scene shot with some incredible ass sniffing coming up! It's Rokky Horror. The girl basically breathes from my ass!

I've purchased that scene and it was really great but unfortunately, the sniffing part was not what I was looking for. Sniffing during rimming should be similar like Hookuphotshot scenes, where he forces the girls to put their nose in his asshole and sniff it! You can actually hear the sniffing sound!

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby mdcrusher » Fri Aug 26, 2022 2:02 pm

Hey TOby try getting Alexxxa VIce to shoot some puke piss anal stuff with you as well as Chloe Lamour and ELen Million.

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Postby sjonesha » Tue Aug 30, 2022 10:16 am

Loving the content and great to see the girls actively involved in the next act to be done, rather than just waiting for something to happen!
I'd like to buy more content so would love the option to be a monthly member with full access, rather than being quoted £400 to download all (which is just too much in late 2022, not matter how good!). Happy to be a monthly member. Cheers

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Postby Vancouver » Wed Sep 07, 2022 10:57 am

sjonesha wrote:Loving the content and great to see the girls actively involved in the next act to be done, rather than just waiting for something to happen!
I'd like to buy more content so would love the option to be a monthly member with full access, rather than being quoted £400 to download all (which is just too much in late 2022, not matter how good!). Happy to be a monthly member. Cheers


I buy some Toby Dick scenes, but I would agree and totally sign up for monthly membership it if was a reasonable price.

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Postby London Boy » Sun Sep 25, 2022 9:37 am

Just bought Toby’s latest scene with Jureka Del Mar. Absolutely loved it . This is definitely for me the best so far . Great use of the fucking machine , so much spit and she fits perfectly in the little paddling pool. Once again Toby flying the very small British porn flag . Keep it up sir .

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Postby mp963 » Mon Sep 26, 2022 6:31 pm

The latest two scenes with JUREKA DEL MAR are great.
Other scenes and girls cannot compare with these two scenes. It is another level.
I appreciate you keep to degrading JUREKA DEL MAR, just keep to spit on her, ass to mouth and 0% pussy.
I know JUREKA DEL MAR is good at gangbanged. If I have not to watch these scenes, I never know JUREKA DEL MAR is very skillful on deep thraot fucking.
Also, I hope these two scenes should be a standard in your studio, this suggestion maybe hard but I will look forward your updates can film at this level too.

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Postby kkk_hh89 » Wed Sep 28, 2022 1:42 pm

Oh my god... the last scene with JUREKA DEL MAR is a masterpiece... a lot of sniffing and snorting... magnificent. Just take my Money!!! Would be great to see some sniffing before doing ATM!!

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Postby Vancouver » Sat Oct 01, 2022 4:33 am

kkk_hh89 wrote:Oh my god... the last scene with JUREKA DEL MAR is a masterpiece... a lot of sniffing and snorting... magnificent. Just take my Money!!! Would be great to see some sniffing before doing ATM!!


Yep, I got both of them. I was surprised he shot with her as he seems to get mostly british sluts ! Big score on this one. I hope it sells well for him; she couldn't have come cheap

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Postby vincenzow » Sun Oct 02, 2022 10:14 pm

would love to see u rough up UK girls like Alexxa Vice and Azura Alii

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby stevenlewisking1982 » Wed Dec 14, 2022 4:32 pm

yo, if you hook me up i could get money rolling in for the industry :cool:

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Postby drevokocur66 » Wed Feb 01, 2023 8:54 am

Great action, loved it but man, hire a cameraman. You have the most annoying and ill timed camera angle switching.
More piss action, more ATM, ATP would rock, and stop pulling the nuts forward on deep throat attempt. Thank you for the scene, Candy is a gorgeous and talented performer.
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Postby xxxVIPERxxx » Thu Feb 02, 2023 7:42 am

Please ensure the female talents wear and KEEP ON sexy high heels...

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Postby ruhiverma » Fri Jun 30, 2023 8:23 am

Just remove yourself from the heart.

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Postby magic_david23 » Fri Jul 14, 2023 5:21 pm

Hola Tobydick, es muy bueno el porno que haces, Enhorabuena!!!
Yo como consejo te digo que podías hacer escenas de grupo (4+you) y mezclar el porno POV que sueles hacer y otro punto de enfoque de cámara con los otros 4 chicos.
Venom evil ya ha trabajado contigo y sin duda es la mejor.
Una escena grupal con Venom (5on1) con facefucking, Gagging, slap, spit, facials. Ella sabe hacerlo bien es sucia y divertida, es una gran apasionada del porno y sabe cómo hacer estas escenas. Gracias.

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Re: Help me be better!

Postby xxxVIPERxxx » Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:05 am

To Toby Dick Studio,

You ask on here for suggestions on how to be better. I have watched your studio and your work closely, with some of your scenes on LPAV (around 10% of them purchased).
Here are some recommendations, which will certainly make me buy your scenes more:

1) The girls you have are actually really hot. Consider styling them and glamming them up better. You do this well in some scenes, but not in all scenes.
2) I think asking the girls to wear stocking/lingerie, and wear sexy heels and keeping them on for the majority of the scene will help your popularity.
3) I love the look of your glans, and the use of a cock ring. However, get the girls to lick/tongue your ass and especially to RIM you for longer.
4) The blowjobs and deepthroating are enjoyable to see, but try to get the girls to puke, and piss puke more often when your cock is rammed down their throats.
5) You spit on the girls faces, tits, and body which are hot to see...consider spreading that wet play all over their faces and ruining their make-up later on in the scene, for every scene.
6) Your style of scene is similar to Max Hardcore, the girl is the star of the show. Glamourise the girl, and get her to do a little striptease dance for a few minutes as foreplay for the start of the scene.
7) Do not hit the girls' asses so hard and so much, that they become red and bruised.
8) Consider fucking their asses so they give an anal gape on screen.
9) There are a lot of toys e.g. lipstick drawing on girls, speculum on the ass, plastic tubing from the ass to mouth, etc that you can use similar to how Max Hardcore treated his girls.
10) Aim for a scene that is 40-55 minutes long. you have some scenes around the 25-35 minute range which seems a bit short for what you are trying to achieve.

A lot of your work is quite decent, and many scenes I am close to buying but just has that final part which holds me back and makes me say that it is not an insta-buy.

Anyway, those are my personal thoughts. The rest is up to you. Good luck!

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