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jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly.
So far I have.
-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)
P.s I did just shoot a DAP with Ana Deville last week that I am editing right now.
jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly.
So far I have.
-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)
dpconnoisseur1 wrote:I think concentrating on multiple penetration will give desperate American hardcore fans some unique content to consume. There is tons of Anal sites in the Adult industry but no exclusive multiple penetration sites (DP, DAP, DPP, TP). That markets needs to be finally tapped, LP proved there were willing customers that would pay a premium for it but it was mostly Euro women driven. Bringing that same intensity, camerawork and multiple penetration content with American models seems like a sure bet.
jeffandersonn wrote:work on the content
- shoot dp/dap/dpp/IR DAP only
- do not end the scene 10 seconds after the popshots
- bring back the swallow
- Stop shooting the entire scene in side view, it's a fucking cancer. PUt the camera in front of the penetration too!
- Stop rotating the camera for no reason, noone wants to watch the scene at 45°. keep a straight horizon!
- DO NOT move the camera every 5 seconds, call every positions and when you find the right angles lock the camera in that positions for at least 40-50 seconds. Tell male talents how to fuck, how you want them to fuck, new generations of male talents don't know how to help the camera guys. they fuck all in the same way generating a lots of blind side for the camera
- Bring back close ups, and tunnel view in cowgirls and reverse. paid attention to the lights and the focus of your camera
gapefan wrote:^Camera angles that obscure the models face are worthless
kidloco2 wrote:Hi Jordan,
welcome to the forum. I really appreciate your interest. Yeah, sometimes critic posts may sound harsh here, but please don't take it personal, this is normal here and 99% time it's meant in a good way. People posting here are very passionate about their best anal porn site .
Bellow I summed it up for the beginning of your work , it may look like many points, but if you get used to it during further shooting it would be very easy.
I dare to say, people posting here suggestions and constructive critic help to make far better scenes and the most exciting anal porn if producers or directors would listen.
So far:
- camera is very busy (not steady, shaky), smoother movement is desired
- lack of more direct frontal (en face) shots, especially during middle / closeup shots (ie pussy/ass licking, penetration, gape), btw. side or diagonal view is a cancer these days
- don't keep one type of a shot during one take, cut in between some close ups or extreme close ups or move the camera for a closeup and back to middle, wider shot (it's actually so so, but needs improvement)
- keep in one shot (preferably middle close up with girl's face in the shot as well) the beginning or ending of a particular penetration or position (thus we can see dick going in or out)
- more ass play especially during solo/lesbo intro, like butt cheeks massaging, ass fingering, anal toys (butt plugs, anal dildos), asshole finger stretching
- anal not intense enough
- more DP and especially DAP!
- more wide gaping
- squirting is not necessary in every scene but when possible very welcome!
- longer endings with swallowing and anal creampies
- more rimjobs (guy and girl)
- shoot like if the girls were posing to the camera
- girls are the center of everything, avoid to stick guy's ass, legs, arms, whatever other than dick in from of the camera
Finally I use graphical depicting suggestion from one my older posts
RedBaron wrote:The reason why i did not buy your first scene is that the girls had bushes.
If you want to sell scenes you should face the taste of LP-members:
85% do not want girls with bushes. Most of them want bald shaved pussies.
I know it is hard to find shaved girls in the US today but i think you must try.
The best of the best would be if you can convince Adriana Chechik to shave her pussy again. Like at the begining of her career.
jordan96 wrote: First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives.
jordan96 wrote:I actually printed this image, it's great!
jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly.
So far I have.
-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)
P.s I did just shoot a DAP with Ana Deville last week that I am editing right now.
CanadianCouple wrote:you guys are assholes.
jordan96 wrote: do DAP, that have big dicks and are not older and give monster facials
jordan96 wrote:monster facials
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