I had!
Some late comments on her 2nd DAP scene than:
https://www.legalporno.com/watch/45982/marilyn_crystal_comes_to_test_black_bulls_dap_iv317First: Camerawork now is soon much improved!
I am so happy The Vulture, mine and others critic was so fruitful in the end!
Now for camera still 2 small things:
1st: Camera for me lingeres a bit too long and too often on ass close-ups here. Close-ups must be, but not too long please!
2nd: Now we have completely missing face close-ups. Here they would add quite a lot, as Marilyn is a sensual girl with some lively reactions. What has to be avoided is frantic close-up changes without long total views to see and savour all the girl in her full beauty, ass to tits to face. But please add also face close-ups, not only shoot ass close-ups.
DAP quality I will comment later.
Just so much: I am pretty impressed, and its also really nice to see you returned to a faster pace when DAP-ing a girl.