imho the camera work was pretty solid.
the obsession of the full body shoot is a cancer. 57 mins of scene and some of you want to see the same angle over and over again.
the only thing missing is tunnel view during cowgirl and reverse.
you were trying to shoot some nice close ups, but you cant shoot it if you stay on the side and male talent do not spread their legs in order to put the camera behind them.
that's why you need tunnel views. to shoot close ups of the penetration. otherwise is pointless.
last thing. never cut the scene at the end like you did. let the girl swallow the cum.
my advice to Jordan is to take notes. if people here want some full body shoot, you should spend some mins shooting that kind of stuff, some min of tunnel view, some min of etc etc. do not let talents direct the scene. and Please consider to add more positions during Dp, like this one