Good to see another American Studio, here is my feedback on this average start
Good:
1. Dp and Gapes
2. Some nice tunnel views
3. Nice new model
4. Facial
5. Nice preparation outfit + makeup
6. Teasing part not forgotten
Bad:
1. Girl too loud, exagerate noise, the louder the faker, i hate fake moaning
2. Guys talks too much
3. Guys Blocking the view too much with arms, legs and face sometimes like in the teasing part when he put toys in her ass, i don't wanna see the guy face
4. Weird piss cumshot from johnny Tatoo
5. Girl poorly shaved
6. The lighting, i hate this camera with ring of light like they use in amateur allure site, look for Giorgio Grandi lasts videos to see what's good lighting, i think he uses a lot of special lamps only for porn shooting.
7. The girl don't know the basics of performing, brief the girls before the scene, the more you see the face/looking at the camera in every position/camera plan, the more it's a good gonzo porn, her head completely disappearing in some plans, tell her to look at the camera more often, the girl has not spread her ass once with her hands for the gape during the action, it shouldn't be the guy doing it, tell her to put her hands on her damn ass, both hands is better, if she's inconfortable then change the sofa or tell her to not do unnecessary leg spreading, or remove heels even if i prefer heels on during all the scene, she was in weird positions sometimes
8. camera work, you have to alternate, it was often too close and stuck on the same plan focus on the ass, again look some giorgio vids for the camera positions & movement, also sometimes the image got blurry, some camera focus problems.
9. spit & slap not necessary, if you wanna do rough porn it has to be rough in the ass here at LP
Good luck for the next.